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interrupted_cut
02-03-2009, 05:44 PM
Came across this while looking for something entirely different, and it seemed appropriate for this forum: "The Copestick & Apprentice"

http://www.morewriting.co.uk/viewwork.php?t=11778

I hope you all find it as enjoyable as I did.

- Davis

dp
02-03-2009, 07:08 PM
I enjoyed the verse and as much the comments that follow. They remind me of the over intellectualized scribblings of wine snobs, not to opine over harsh on it. Such things as "This peckish red is shrewish, biting, and brash as a scorned woman and haunts the tongue from beyond the swallow. It has the complexity of a child's top." go into my collector's box (though that one I wrote myself for a humor piece).

For free verse it was actually quite entertaining - the journeyman taken down a peg by his own hand all the while filling the air with his own cockiness and false confidence.

Teenage_Machinist
02-03-2009, 09:27 PM
LOL! That's pretty good....

Teenage_Machinist
02-03-2009, 09:40 PM
LOL! That's pretty good....

10KPete
02-03-2009, 11:37 PM
I like that one. Reminds me of WC Fields rants.

Pete